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September Rains

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My Calendar of Haiku - September

It’s around 9 o’clock in the evening - already dark. A brief respite from the rain; the full moon (almost) playing ‘peek-a-boo’, through the clouds. The street light flickers - on - off - on. Our garden Robin sings from a hazel in the hedge. Just for a moment ...

 lights flicker 
after the storm
a robin sings

Robin (and Blackbird) will sing at night especially if near or under a street lamp, or if the moon is bright. Robin are highly territorial and sing all year round; their autumn song quieter and more melancholy sounding than their lively upbeat spring song.

The recording in this post is used here under the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike license. This and many more can be found at - Xeno-Canto

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navasolanature
September 1, 2020 12:29 am

Lovely build up in the haiku to the robin singing.

Sabishī
September 1, 2020 12:34 am

I enjoyed this post, September Rains, and especially your hokku/haiku, A Robin Sings. I would like your permission to display it in my Hokku Garden (collection)! The xeno-canto site is fantastic!! I will use it, often, now. Thanks!

Sabishī
September 1, 2020 5:35 pm
Reply to  Clive Bennett

I was thinking:

Lights flicker,
After the storm;
A robin sings.

but it’s entirely up to you. Both work, in my opinion.
Choose one and I will display it.
If you choose the former, then I’ll find a photo of a storm that has passed.
If you choose the latter, then I’ll find a photo of a robin singing.
Thank you for allowing me to display your verse.
Let me know!

Jane Pearce janesnaturewalks
September 1, 2020 5:38 am

Love a robin singing on my walks

Jane Pearce janesnaturewalks
September 1, 2020 8:30 am
Reply to  Clive Bennett

I stood listening to one a couple of days ago. Warms the heart

Deborah Vass
September 1, 2020 9:15 am

A beautiful haiku, Clive. The last line is so effectively placed.

JCHome
September 1, 2020 12:37 pm

You have such a wonderful way with words

Ashley
September 1, 2020 2:25 pm

Lovely verse Clive! And a nice ‘conversion’ to hokku.

Ashley
September 1, 2020 2:39 pm
Reply to  Clive Bennett

You should mention this to Edward-sama!

Vicki
Vicki
September 2, 2020 12:20 am

Beautiful

Sandra
September 5, 2020 11:00 am

Beautiful, Clive, and perfectly complements the mournful robin I listened to just the other evening. Thanks too for the introduction to Hokku which will keep me interested for quite some while

Jane
September 5, 2020 2:07 pm

Beautiful robin song! uplifting

Andrea Stephenson
September 7, 2020 4:23 pm

This is so atmospheric Clive. I love the street light detail and that ‘after the storm’ feeling.